I don't know where to start...First I'll write something positive. I believe that this author can write better she showed some potential (IMO as I am not literature critic or something) As to the story...it is short and that good otherwise I wouldn't have been able to finish. The main characters are one dimensional as much as it is possible and the supposedly loving father can have instant erection while his child is in hospital and they had lost their home. What a powerful libido! I thought stress and worries kills sex drive. Do I have to mention that our MC are incredibly sexy and gorgeous or in one word are supermegafoxyawesomehot and they fell in lust loove after first glance and are soul mates and whatnot.