Good but a bit boring and the usual problems (too much telling, unclear pronoun references) However I don't care as I really like Roan, and Holden is interesting. I would say that the weakest link in this book is Gary Stu Dylan.
The Mammoth Book of Victorian and Edwardian Ghost Stories
Charles Dickens, Henry James, Robert Hugh Benson, Tom Gallon, Clive Pemberton, Allen Upward, Alice Perrin, Lettice Galbraith, J.E.P. Muddock, Theo Gift, Frank Cowper, J.B. Harwood, Grant Allen, Alexandre Chatrian, Émile Erckmann, Erckmann-Chatrian, Rhoda Broughton, Dinah